Paper Moon

Thursday 19 January 2012

trailing my hand
through the water
for a moment
more river
than man

Blithe Spirit V21 N4

Frank... said...: A wonderful combo of images - a lot to think about. A creative 2012 to you too, Paul...; 19 January 2012 at 17:32
Brian said...: "River-Man" somehow feels right, Paul.; 22 January 2012 at 15:41
maggie said...: Lovely, Paul. Happy New Year to you!; 22 January 2012 at 18:28
ThoseThr3Words-Claire said...: Paul,

I just LOVED this tanka as soon as I read it in Blithe Spirit! It's just so perfect, so deceptively simple and so memorable. One of my all time favourite Paul Smith creations. Thank you!; 31 January 2012 at 20:33
Dave Serjeant said...: a moment of true abandonment. Nice one, Paul; 4 February 2012 at 00:22
Paul Smith said...: Thank you All. Your comments mean so much to me...; 9 February 2012 at 06:51